Siz pages of a cluster-fuck on spelling and grammar, and nobody asked Thump whether he should have said 'an alumnus' rather than 'an alumni', which in formal usage is a plural noun?
gee, bb73, that is but one other mistake in thump's message to the author. more mistakes:
1. no comma after "State"
2. no comma after "Overhyped"
3. no question mark at the end of first paragraph
4. italics and quotation marks are redundant (in regard to quoted material)
5. underlining and quotation marks are redundant (in regard to "villianize")
6. inside of double quotation marks, more double quotation marks are found (should be single quotation marks)
7. notes that author says something in the article; authors don't "say" in print -- they write
8. "seriously" modifies what is near, and thump, i imagine, did not intend such a meaning; should be "to take seriously what... "
9. "98 & 2000" lacks continuity; should be "1998 & 2000"
10. should be "Class of 1998 & 2000"
11. "Classes (sic) of 98 & 2000" should be on the next line, and directly underneath, "Thump"
12. double quotation marks surround the whole letter; this placement creates lots of problems for the interior material surrounded by double quotation marks; although, it is understood that the quotation marks surrounding the whole of the letter are likely not found in the actual letter to the author
i am, however, not attempting to be a or the grammar nazi. not proclaiming myself as such exculpates me from any expectation of perfection. i'll preempt one possible rebuttal to my writing style and/or grammar: the lack of capitalization, if it is deliberate and done with the complete understanding of what proper capitalization is, is a consideration of style and not a mistake in grammar.
my sole point of this and my prior messages is that if one is going to correct another, the person should make sure that his or her s*it is together. that's all. no offense to thump or anyone else should be taken.
"As an alumni of Ohio State I value the fact that you can speak your mind in your article "Rivalry too Overhyped" but how about learning how to spell before you make yourself look like any more of an idiot.
You state:
"While loyal to OSU, it still strikes me as odd how we "villianize" a school of comparable quality to our own from apparent envy."
It's spelled "villainize."
Good luck getting people to take what you have to say seriously.
Sincerely,
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