generaladm
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Couldn't have said it better myself
I could...
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That could be a problem ... but it's a risk that Ohio State can afford to take, because of the current depth in the program.
I would have said:
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That could be a problem ... but given the current depth in the program it's a risk that Ohio State can afford to take.
Same meaning, but it flows better IMO.
Other than that, it's perfect.
Shouldn't that be, "That may be a problem...but given the current depth in the program, it's a risk that Ohio State can afford to make."?
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